One of the funniest twitterfiction I've read! jaja The only thing, is that I would change the tittle, because when you read it, you already know that the battle it's going to be a food one. If you put an "ambigous" tittle, the end will be more shocking. Anyway, I love the story!
I agree with them. It is one of the funniest tweets I have read. Imagery is very clear and makes you laugh because it shows the true that any child have played with food anytime and was stopped by their parents. Good story =)
It´s very funny, in addition it´s at the same time something that happen in real life; kids are all the time playing with the food, making lunchs and dinners funnier. The imagery reflects very well the story,anyway it´s a great story.:D
One of the funniest twitterfiction I've read! jaja
ResponderEliminarThe only thing, is that I would change the tittle, because when you read it, you already know that the battle it's going to be a food one. If you put an "ambigous" tittle, the end will be more shocking.
Anyway, I love the story!
It is very funny how a dinner or a lunch could become an open war.
ResponderEliminarI agree with them. It is one of the funniest tweets I have read. Imagery is very clear and
ResponderEliminarmakes you laugh because it shows the true that any child have played with food anytime and was stopped by their parents. Good story =)
It´s very funny, in addition it´s at the same time something that happen in real life; kids are all the time playing with the food, making lunchs and dinners funnier.
ResponderEliminarThe imagery reflects very well the story,anyway it´s a great story.:D
Bea I agree with you so I have change the title! Thank you ;)
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