I don´t know when we will see her again, but every day I have less hope. When she disappeared, I felt like living a temporally nightmare, in any moment It would finish and all would be like before. We would enjoy with her smile, we would see those beautiful eyes and we would live with her sweetie. She was my favorite since she was born, and their brothers know it.
Two years ago we waited her to dinner and she didn´t appeared. What happened to her? Why didn´t she return? Where is she now? Nobody knows it. I feel rage because we can’t answer these questions; it is something that burning inside me, something that I think all the hours. A real nightmare that don´t leave me to live calm.
It keeps you intrigued since the first moment you start to read. I like feelings descriptions, however I had expected a shocking ending but it´s ok. I like the story :)
ResponderEliminarI like the way you show the frustation of a person whose friend is missing...!
ResponderEliminarI thinkit´s very clear! There aren´t any onther open different interpretation! I like how you focus the description!
Good work Bea :D
ISABEL SANCHEZ MONJE
powerful narration, but you need to give it more of a plot
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