Our micro fiction literary journal
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love this story. obviously reader expectations are defeated
You cannot imagine the big smile in my face after reading the last sentence. It's really moving for me (as a teacher trainee). G-R-E-A-T.
I totally agree with Alfonso! I expected it to be referred to a child, not to the teacher! Well done! =)
I agree with them too, you expect to be a kid who says that! But at the end, a big smile appears in your face(we imagine ourselves at our first day as teachers and we see this) :)
love this story. obviously reader expectations are defeated
ResponderEliminarYou cannot imagine the big smile in my face after reading the last sentence. It's really moving for me (as a teacher trainee). G-R-E-A-T.
ResponderEliminarI totally agree with Alfonso! I expected it to be referred to a child, not to the teacher! Well done! =)
ResponderEliminarI agree with them too, you expect to be a kid who says that! But at the end, a big smile appears in your face(we imagine ourselves at our first day as teachers and we see this) :)
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